The Zeta Reads ~ Private Investigator Isabel Raven Monta Rosa by Cordia St. Clair

There’s a fine line between giving an honest review and just outright being a jerk. Sometimes that line is very blurred.

Simon Cowell is often referred to as a jerk. He brings tears to the eyes of hopeful musicians and he does not apologize for this. In the beginning, this caused friction with fellow American Idol judges Randy and Paula. And from the beginning of the UK X-Factor, Britain’s Got Talent, and all of the other shows that Cowell has produced and/or participated in as judge, his straight forward personality and abrupt manner have been the subject of both praise and ridicule. Simon Cowell is not a jerk. He’s a business man. He is not a singer, but he knows a good singer when he hears one and more to the point, he knows who will make the best return on his investments.

Youtube commenters that suggest people they don’t like should commit suicide are jerks.

That is the line.

I fully intend to give the following work a very honest review. It will seem as though I am being a jerk, because to be quite frank, I downloaded it for free and I still overpaid. But all an honest review means is that I am being fully honest about the feelings this work has provoked in me and I am not receiving any compensation for it whatsoever.

Maybe I’m not being fully honest. After I downloaded this story, by Cordia St. Clair, I was on my way home to read and review it, when I found a twenty-dollar bill on the ground. Was this some cosmic payment for the honesty that I am about to unleash? Is there a divine power above me that is spurring me to tell Cordia St. Clair what clearly no one in her inner circle has had the courage to tell her?

I’ll leave it for you to decide. And by you, I mean my faithful readers, not my therapists, lawyers, and the future Internet Archaeologists who uncover my blog and wonder if this is what led to the Great Lunar Catastrophe of 2035.

Cordia does not believe in using covers for her books. Because, to paraphrase her interview responses, she wants the work to speak for itself. She does not wish for the quality of her work to be judged by the cover. This might mean something if the quality of her work was not a very juvenile effort.

The story I downloaded promised “lots of twists”. It also promised that “I will like this”.

The first big twist is that apparently all one has to do to become a “Private-Eye” is to write a letter to your local sheriff’s department and list all of the things you are good at. The second twist is that the sheriff’s office will write you back to say, “Yup, you’ve got the job.” No real experience required, no background check, no interview. I’ve always assumed that becoming a licensed private investigator would require a lot more effort than selecting a job from the newspaper of the latest Sims game, but apparently I was wrong.

Halfway through the 33 page long story, a fantasy subplot gets introduced wherein the main antagonists are named Count Van Helsing and Count Von Headlock. And it’s appropriate enough because this story is a fantasy. And not Game of Thrones fantasy, but the kind of fantasy where you and your best friend chase one another in the school yard shooting one another with a pistol made from your finger and thumb.

What really drew my attention to her work was the fact that she has invited people to contact her, just on the off chance they might want to pay her actual money for her writing. Well, Cordia, if you read this, I hope take this to heart.

If you really want someone to take you seriously as a writer, take all of those stories off of Smashwords. Take them down and rewrite your first book. Whether it’s a short story, or a novella, or what have you, you need to take your time with that first work. Write it, finish it, and then find someone who will give you the mother of all proofreads. That someone cannot be your friend, or your boss, or your family member, or your coworker who is only trying to make you happy because they hope you’ll swap shifts with them on Friday.

Pour your heart and soul into that book. Your father told you to try for attainable goals; well you’re not even trying. When I see work like this, I see someone who might have typed something out on their iPhones during their fifteen minute break, and maybe spent their half-hour break uploading the story to Smashwords. I can’t believe that anyone who truly cares about you and the impression you make on those people that you hope will one day offer you money in exchange for your work, would take a look at your story and say, “This is perfect. Post it up now.”

You might also come back at me with the fact that English may not be your first language. If that’s so, that still is not an excuse. Because if you were writing in your first language, you would still have to produce something that was as polished as it could possibly be before you even think of asking someone to judge the story by the writing.

Also, don’t besmirch the idea of a cover. Because a picture of yourself, which you don’t seem shy about using in lieu of a cover, is not doing you any favors in the marketing department. This is not a personal attack on your looks, or your appearance, but until people consider your writing akin to an unholy addiction (which might offend you as a Christian writer, but even Christian writers have to have a proofreader) then you may want to think twice before they associate your face with a story that they can’t even bring themselves to finish.

In the words of Simon Cowell, I’m giving this story four no’s.

4 thoughts on “The Zeta Reads ~ Private Investigator Isabel Raven Monta Rosa by Cordia St. Clair

  1. Sometimes, you just have to be honest, right? Bad writing is bad writing. It doesn’t mean the author isn’t capable of better, though. Glad to have a genuine and thoughtful review of a piece of work. Thanks!

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  2. NSC, I chased over here from Absolute Write to find out what a Zeta Read was supposed to be. The worst of the worst? Can’t be: your Alpha Read isn’t the best of the best. So help me out here, pal.

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    1. Alpha Reads are simply books that are currently published. Beta Reads would be books that I reviewed or read before publication that are no published, whether traditionally or through self publishing.

      Zeta reads are books or published works that my parents could legally have me sectioned for, if I had actually paid money for any of them.

      Just like your assessment of the books I reviewed for Alpha Reads, all of my reviews are obviously opinions and people are free to come to their own conclusions.

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